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LOVE IS HUMAN SHAPED
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Love is human shaped
It is a small child
Running through a field of daisies
In the sunshine
Chasing butterflies
Under the blue sky and rolling white clouds
So innocent
But
Behind the lush green hills and swaying breezes
Something awakens and is watching him
Disturbed by the radiance of his joyful smile
So it waits
Yet another butterfly catches the child's eye
He turns a corner
Reaching out his small eager fingers
Then , the ax swings
Decapitating his head
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Love is human shapedIt is a small childRunning through a field of daisiesIn the sunshineChasing butterfliesUnder the blue sky and rolling white cloudsSo innocent
I love how you captured the essence of the beauty of love. -
Disturbed by the radiance of his joyful smileSo it waits Yet another butterfly catches the child's eyeHe turns a cornerReaching out his small eager fingersThen , the ax swingsDecapitating his head
Love is truly a double-edged sword. Opening up for love means you up yourself up for the good and the bad, to be loved, and to be hurt. Great poem/story.
Im just glad you didn't hate it !! Thank you david:) I try