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LETTER TO FIVE YEAR OLD ME (POETRY)
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Dear Me before I was 5,
How was life
I heard we use to like to read
I heard you knew how to speak
I heard you such a smart kid
and it was all just taken away
Were you happy
Were you legendary
Were you smart enough to skip kindergarten
Were you makeing other people happy even then
I remember bits and peices
I remember that your happy face was your normal face because you were actually and always happy
I remember you knew how to make friends
I remember you were the nices guy
Now you're considered the average star at night
not shining as bright
just trying to shine
but not shine bright enough to gudie the ones who need the light
I was told you were wise
I was told you knew your wrongs and rights
I was told you were the cool guy
at the age of 5 the year 2005
you and my memories were wiped by a Grade IV Brain tumor that night
Now the signs of a light
was deleted out of sight
out of mind
I feel we would be a different man if life kept you that time
Now I'm just a musican that people still see with possibility
When we lost everything that you migh come back to me
the lkight that I need to shine brighter then me to be happy
with what I'm doing
Cause you would be the genius people see in me
while I feel like my 5 yewar old self
is still doing better then
me
happy 13 year anniversary, 5 year old me
-from othello Pass
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I remember you were the nices guyNow you're considered the average star at nightnot shining as brightjust trying to shinebut not shine bright enough to gudie the ones who need the light
When I tell you, I can relate to this so heavily. -
you and my memories were wiped by a Grade IV Brain tumor that nightNow the signs of a lightwas deleted out of sightout of mind
Aww. Wow. I'm speechless. Sorry about this. You are able to create such beautiful pieces through it all. Your 5 year old self would be proud. -
You have a great capacity to reflect on the past and put things into perspective. Thanks for sharing!
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You are doing great! It is hard to know really how you would have turned out if things had been different. Maybe having that brain tumor served a higher purpose and uncovered a new path for you that is even brighter. Keep up the good work!
Thank you