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Private Notes
Private Notes
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I wish they had told you that you were more than plastic. They looked past you because they were scared of what they would see in you.
You are 70% ocean.
You are vast, and dangerous, and a mystery. You are home to so much the world will never understand.
You are iron blood.
You are metal in your veins, pumping and beating and strong. You are forged for greater things.
You are star dust.
You are part magic, part science, beauty and fear wrapped up in muscle and bone. You are born of fire and hydrogen, carry explosives in your words, big enough to light up the world.
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You are 70% ocean.You are vast, and dangerous, and a mystery. You are home to so much the world will never understand.You are iron blood.You are metal in your veins, pumping and beating and strong. You are forged for greater things.You are star dust.
I like the way you described this person(?). So scientifically poetic. We are exactly this as humans. -
Beautiful poem! Very inspirational and artistic. Thanks for charring Christine!
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Are you describing a person or our planet? Either way, this is a great poem that carries a lot of symbolism.
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Gosh I just love how you write, all your descriptions are so evocative.