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HAPPY LITTLE TREES
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I cannot write happy little stories
about happy little trees
in worlds that do not exist
because life is anything but-
there are moments of joy
as any life has
but they are few and far between
so it makes no sense to tell tall tales
I know nothing of
when my heart and experience
are firmly grounded in profound misery
of death
depression
and a reality brashly ignored
by the rest of this happy little world
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This definitely is the essence of what depression is and feels like.
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Existence can be hard, and your poem definitely conjours that feeling.
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I have a hard time writing about the brighter side of things as well. Idk...I feel like there is more beauty and depth in pain and sadness. I think your poetry is brilliant and when I read it, it gives the feeling of a familiar place where people like me can be themselves and don't have to force a smile to make others comfortable.
I do feel like there is beauty in pain and sadness, or reality of life as I call it. I stopped faking smiles a long time ago.