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RECESS IS IN SESSION

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Submitted Date 05/09/2019
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Private Notes

there are empty spaces

in the recesses of my mind

where nothing grows

but I can see a forest

whose branches are like fireworks exploding into pinwheels

toward a hazy white sky

and the spent ash collects

at the base of the trees

as petrified embers like a blanket along the horizon

or a rip in space

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  • Tomas Chough 4 years, 11 months ago

    Very artistic vibe. You can tell it's inspired by a painting. Nice job!

  • No name 4 years, 11 months ago

    I love the imagery your words give.

  • Miranda Fotia 4 years, 11 months ago

    Great analogy!