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I look up to the stars,
no one around, except me and them,
spots of light,
pieces of the universe, components of everything that surrounds us.
I wonder what they know, the things they have seen,
remembering the song I once sung as a child.
Everyone sees these same stars.
They exist for us, guide us,
our lives intertwined with theirs.
Do you think they remember us?
Anointing the sky, they shine boldly and inspire us to think and write and do.
Yes, I think they remember us.
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I look up to the stars,no one around, except me and them,spots of light,pieces of the universe, components of everything that surrounds us.I wonder what they know, the things they have seen, remembering the song I once sung as a child.
This literally makes me feel like outside on a beautiful night, where it's not quite dark, but it's not light outside, once of those medium blueish dark skies where you're out on the grass, looking at the stars, and you're just reminiscing and evaluating your life. Beautiful. -
Everyone sees these same stars.They exist for us, guide us, our lives intertwined with theirs. Do you think they remember us?
I love this idea that the stars are looking at us like guardian angels, as they look back at us, like they've seen us before in a past life, and wondering how we're doing now.-
What a wonderful way to think of stars. Thank you :)
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You're welcome, thank you Ceara.
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I like the dreaminess to it Ceara! You're pretty good at getting readers into the vibe of your writing. Keep it up!
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Thanks Tomas!
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This is beautiful, Ceara!
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Thank you!
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Beautiful sentiment! Thanks for sharing!
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Glad you liked it :)
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What a wonderful image, thank you for sharing that!