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I want something
And that is always where the problem
Hangs its hat.
Puts its feet on my table
Grinning at me with a mouth full of
Fish bone teeth
Asking what's for dinner.
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I love the phrase" fish bone teeth" the image is real.
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I want somethingAnd that is always where the problemHangs its hat.
I love the imagery of this part. It's like going to a diner, and they have the receipt or ticket for your order hanging on that hook.-
Thank you! I imagined it as kind of a no-good character that just walks into your house unannounced and makes himself at home.
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Wanting can definitely be the start of a big problem...or a wonderful adventure. I also like the phrase "fish bone teeth" and the cover image you chose to go with it.
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Thank you for reading Miranda!
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Thank you! Because it's so short, I kind of consider that the centerpiece of the poem.