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Unnoticed
There is a tiny thin line
weaving and wandering
like a creek bed
- invisible like the equator
and it is all that separates misery
from absolute ecstasy.
One wrong step could be tragic.
You were not given a map.
There is murky water
And you cannot see
below.
- Not even your own reflection
is there.
When you squint,
you’re still a blur.
You have a problem.
The problem is not that you
will die.
- It is the knowing.
You wish you didn’t.
There are animals
and some talk to you
as though you understand
their guttural sounds
and strange gurgles.
But most walk by
- unaffected.
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Very mysterious! Great piece!
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The problem is not that youwill die.- It is the knowing.You wish you didn’t.
I feel this way a lot.