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MISSING HER
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Missing her
I walk in and the dishes are piled high
Missing you
I try
I try to do as you would have done
Im so angry at you
So angry
I wanted to drop kick the china cabinet
Isn't that funny
Because it's not at all in my nature to
The others come in
All of a sudden
The kitchen becomes a concert
But I miss her still
And I'm angry still
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Missing herI walk in and the dishes are piled highMissing youI tryI try to do as you would have done
These lines are so sad and lovely at the same time. It's like reminiscing over someone who used to share the same same as you, missing the simple things (maybe that you used to be annoyed with, the piled dishes), but honoring their legacy ("I try"). -
The kitchen becomes a concertBut I miss her stillAnd I'm angry still
As like seems to get better, it never replaces that feeling of that person being there, so it still seems to fall short. Sorry for your loss. -
I wanted to drop kick the china cabinet
We've all been there in our grief.
I like the time you take to analyze what i write, it makes me feel important:) im so honored you read and also think about it , thank you david