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FLIPPING COINS WITH BRUCE
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Flipping Coins With Bruce
Age 20, Cambridge, Massachusetts, 1964
-- This is one poem, in an autobiographical series of poems, I posted here at WriteSpike. Go to my stories section for others. They are in chronological order. --
It is by chance that we met, by choice that we became friends.
~ Quote from Unknown Author ~
It was the summer of serendipity -
after a chance meeting
Bruce and I became fast friends;
above the noise of the city
we spent evenings on his roof-top porch
listening to the lush sitar solos of Ravi Shankar
and the complex keyboard of Beethoven sonatas
occasionally we descended down to
the cacophony of the streets
to Elsie's Diner
with the best jukebox in town;
between bites of Reubens, we listened
to Martha and the Vandellas -
"Heat Wave," Bruce said
"is as tight as any tune by Mozart"
on a trip to New York we scoured the town
for a color organ
a jukebox that displayed dark violet for the low notes
and yellows for the high ones
- state of the art for its time;
it took four hours but
we, at last, landed our prize
at a small bar in the Village
the only place with such a one
in Manhattan
both interested in John Cage, chance
and things that came out of the blue
we drove one night to an intersection
and began a coin flip game:
tails, left; heads, right
and when three roads converged,
we flipped twice
all went well until we got caught in a circle
that looped and would not let us go -
determined to play by the rules
we kept flipping until
finally we were released
and chance put us back on the main road
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a jukebox that displayed dark violet for the low notes and yellows for the high ones
I love how you conceptualized the high and low notes. Even if that's what the jukebox actually did, I think it's beautiful. -
I love the way you write. This definitely puts the reader at the time and settings to experience the things the same way you did.
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I was thinking about your comment and realized that this was a poem that another person could try in their own life -- while the hitchhiking I wrote about is probably not something most people should do.
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I love feeling a part of the scene.
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See my comment above to David Ross Washington Jr This is something that people can be a part of.
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This sounds like so much fun. Great piece!
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Well, this is one poem you could do if you wanted. I would suggest driving to some place away from your house and then start flipping coins.
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on a trip to New York we scoured the town for a color organ a jukebox that displayed dark violet for the low notes and yellows for the high ones - state of the art for its time; it took four hours but we, at last, landed our prize at a small bar in the Village the only place with such a one in Manhattan
Love this part. Another great movie scene!-
I guess it makes all that music we had been listening to visual.
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Well, you're right -- I did not really remember what they did, so I came up with violet for low and yellow for high.