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MY THOUGHTS RETURN
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Thoughts abounding, rebounding.
Trying to revive my attention, to drown me.
I turn up the music,
trying to obliterate the words coursing within the world in my head.
Another attempt miscarried,
Speakers are blown from previous tries.
My mind’s gone numb to the sounds;
Unable consign my thoughts to oblivion.
Forced to bethink, to memorialize the pain.
There will be no shunning.
For I know there will be repossession in my future.
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Thoughts abounding, rebounding.Trying to revive my attention, to drown me.
As dark as this is, I love it. -
I turn up the music,trying to obliterate the words coursing within the world in my head.Another attempt miscarried,Speakers are blown from previous tries.My mind’s gone numb to the sounds;Unable consign my thoughts to oblivion.Forced to bethink, to memorialize the pain.There will be no shunning.
I can so personally relate to this 150%. Great poetry. -
I turn up the music,trying to obliterate the words coursing within the world in my head.
Hi Rebekah! I've definitely been there! Our thoughts seem to just take over sometimes and it feels like we have no control. Awesome writing. Thanks for sharing! -
I turn up the music,trying to obliterate the words coursing within the world in my head.
I relate to this so much! Beautiful poem! Thanks for sharing!