ROMANTIC LIMBO

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Submitted Date 03/03/2019
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Romantic limbo

 

Can you feel it too?

The energy,

That seems to flow between us?

Do you see the sparks?

That fly off my fingertips from your touch.

Do the roads in my mind that you ride through

Ever have traffic,

Which is why you seemingly never leave.

Late night drives through my dreams

As my desires create the events that I hope to one day achieve

Yet seemingly...

It will never beat the real thing.

So I lie awake wishing to be unconscious...

To join your drive.

Because it gets lonely...

Not having you to share my time

 

Did you feel it too.

The energy.

That seemed to flow between us.

Could you see the sparks?

That flew off my fingertips from your last touch….

Do the roads in my mind that you ride through

Ever have traffic?

Which is why you seemingly never leave….

Late night drives through my dreams

As my desires create the events that I hope to one day achieve

Yet seemingly….

It will never beat the real thing...

So I lie awake wishing to be unconscious….

To join your drive.

Because it gets lonely….

Being the only one alive

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  • David Ross Washington Jr 2 years, 2 months ago

    Interesting. Great poem.

  • Tomas Chough 2 years, 2 months ago

    Pretty creative poem! It has a nice nostalgic feeling to it too. Thanks for sharing!

  • Miranda Fotia 2 years, 1 month ago

    Great poem! You really captured the raw feelings and confusion of being in "romantic limbo".